Feedback from documentary draft

 Today I had a discussion with Mrs Hutchings about my media documentary. After a rather heated discussion as I got very defensive over my work,  I decided it was best to listen to the advice I had been offered and make the changes as stated in the picture below. As an overview, Mrs Hutchings was correct as there were quite a few tweaks that needed doing along with some shots that to the media consumer may seem out of place due to them not knowing who certain people are in the fishing world, and also need to change some repeated shots.



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